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Man in window.
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Took this one from a car park using the full 12x, I had a steady hand that day :lol:
Dave.
Like your image Dave. Its a bit sinister but has good strong lines with the patterns of the windows holding your attention as your eye moves around the image and constantly comes back to the small subject in the window.
haha… I like the way you caught him there… sticking out on his own!
And all the windows look like old computer screens with keyboards (You could say… they are all running Windows….. Ahem…. I think Ive been working with computers faaaarrrr too long!).
I cant make up my mind though whether the man being more or less in the centre of the image works… I think it does only becase of the pattern the differently coloured slabs make up… which is not centered like he is.
The front facing horizontal lines are not straight which looks like the pic is sloping from right to left… even though the verticals are (almost) dead straight…
Really like this one Dave. It asks so many questions…or maybe I’m just a nosey bugger… :wink:
Jay is right though..they DO look like old PC monitors…… Windows…cool… :D
Well spotted! I’d agree with Jay’s suggestion of straightening the horizontals and also consider cropping out the chopped off bottom window. Nice shot.
I love this scene.
Why don’t you sacrifice a few pixels and crop in tighter to your man, just to have an idea of the expression on his face. I just can’t shake the feeling that he was naked when you took this shot.
Thanks for all the tips and wise advice.
Cropping is not something I think about very often but I am slowly getting the idea into my head.
I have learnt a lot in my short time here..thank you one and all.Dave.
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