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  • Allinthemind
    Participant

    The “Dance London” exhibition want to use this at Olympia as their poster (3 metres wide.. eek). It was taken during a tutorial (like most of my shots). There’s so much that isn’t right with it, just goes to show, Markets are fickle.

    Si

    stcstc
    Member

    Si

    I actualy quite like it, and do understand why the twirlies want to use it. It has quite a nice serene mood to it and feels quite contemporary.

    And most dance companies aspire to both of these things

    Also when it comes down to it the public dont know and dont care about the rules of photography. IMPACT and presentation is what matters. An i think thats what you have caught

    gerald
    Participant

    i can see the graphic appeal it has and thats propably why they picked it and it may have been a designer and not a photographers choice… just a thought

    terry
    Member

    I can definetly see why it would appeal to a marketing company. It has great impact and although technically you are not happy with the shot it screams everything they are trying to portray. Congratulations make sure they pay you well.

    Terry

    Rob
    Member

    Now this really is interesting Si. You say there’s so much wrong with it…
    Care to share your thoughts on that?

    I actually like it a lot, and can see its appeal immediately. The compositional
    line, the extended arm almost bisecting the frame on the diagonal, is very
    defined and leads the viewer immediately to the main subject, isolated
    by light from above in a field of darkness and hard shadow. What’s not
    to like?

    I may very well be completely wrong, but to me this is a cracking photograph.
    I’d be well pleased had I taken it myself.

    Rob.

    stcstc
    Member

    Having looked again at this shot

    Having worked quite a bit with dance companies.

    One of the things dancers do a lot is play with the light, like you have in the shot, they will move in and out of the light to create shapes etc.

    The other thing about his shot is it works very well for poster type stuff as it has space to add graphics, type etc and the arm and face will frame that type of stuff nicely

    those sort of poster things are not about the technically best photograph, there about impact and mood as i said before, and i think this shot does a very good job of it

    Expresbro
    Participant

    I wish my bad shots looked as good as this Si. Hell…I wish my good shots looked like this.

    I bet this will get lots of positive comment at the exhibition :D

    Robbie
    8)

    Ali
    Participant

    Si, that’s SUPER news :D you have to get someone to take a pic of it for you so you can post it. Bet you’re chuffed XX

    richiehatch
    Member

    I think its great… Very very graphic image and can certainly understand why it choosen…! Well done..!

    Richie

    Pippatee
    Member

    I agree, this shot is immediately eye-catching and has fantastic graphic appeal….the customer got a good one with this!

    Allinthemind
    Participant

    Thanks folks.. note to self, let other people decide which images work and don’t :)

    Si

    stcstc
    Member

    Si

    one thing i realised recently here

    Photographers are the last people to ask about an image for the public, photographers tend to be looking at the image fom a photographic perspective but the public aint gonna do that

    So a great test is go ask the inlaws or someone, they will be frank and straight with you and you can see traight away from their face as to the impact

    David_S
    Participant

    i too am fascinated by the comment ‘there is so much wrong with it’ … and would love to hear what u think is wrong with it si.
    i firmly believe too many people get hung up with technicalities .. missing the gut reaction a shot has with it’s audience
    congrats sir :-)

    d

    Allinthemind
    Participant

    wrong with it, mostly techincal stuff (especially when they want it 3 metres wide). It’s cropped for that composition, again making the resolution iffy.

    Many thanks guys, importnat lesson for me with this. :)

    Never too old

    Si

    ellude
    Participant

    This is great! I can see immediately why the dance company would like it!

    Simple, stylish, effective….

    It will make a super poster :)

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