I reckon this image has got potential.
The only comments I would make though is that I think it is on need of some cropping.
The girls jumper is little overpowering for my liking there is also a some of the curtain showing on
the top right that keeps leading my away from the subject.
IMHO i would crop to just the girls face with the cat below. I would try and get rid of as much of the
jumper as i could. Maybe the B+W conversion would help.
It is a good picture but the lines on the girls jumper are jsut to severe and distracting IMHO.