I also like the second shot as the blurred images of other band members want my eye to focus there also.Good crisp photos and great framing.well done indeed
Purely as constructive criticism I would say there is a lack of energy and mood to the pics. It’s not your technical skills, but from listening to his album (and only seeing him live on the telly once) I would expect to see some more emotion, the dreadlocks mid-swing, a look of angst in his face.
He has a great face for photos and I think an extreme close up, highlighting all his eyeliner and dreads mid-song would work great.
Some of the pics seem a tad overexposed with serious hot spots on th cheeks (could be my monitor and I know gigs are far from ideal lighting conditions).