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  • brookied
    Participant

    Any comments on the below would be nice.
    Thanks

    Rob
    Member

    I like the high key approach, though personally I think you’ve cropped too
    closely for this to work well, losing that whole fade-to-white effect more
    commonly seen. The heavy black frame doesn’t help in this respect
    either. Also, high key images tend to work better with a ‘softer’ approach,
    whereas this one is so sharp that even the freckles have edges.
    I like the idea, but I think it might be worth revisiting the processing…

    Rob.

    brookied
    Participant

    you think maybe more space top and bottom or more from the sides? what about the whole face? first time with this kind of edit ;-)

    PeteTheBloke
    Member

    I’m a bit put off by the overall flattening of the cheeks and hence the face caused by the processing and, perhaps, the direct flash.
    The sharpness also renders some undesirable details highly visible e.g. nostril hair.
    This person must have a lovely face – I’m sure seeing more of it would be more attractive.

    brookied
    Participant

    Ok lads, here is a different version

    PeteTheBloke
    Member

    Much more appealing, though I wish the chin was all there.

    Rob
    Member

    PeteTheBloke wrote:

    Much more appealing, though I wish the chin was all there.

    Likewise.
    Lighting behind might also help make it more high key…

    Rob.

    brookied
    Participant

    thanks guys, overall a better shot. keeps me going in the right direction

    shutterbug
    Participant

    Hi Brookied, I have been experimenting with High Key portraits at the
    moment and I had a play around with your picture (hope you dont mind)
    I added a bit of selective colour and and skewed and cropped it a bit,
    what do you think?

    Doesnt take long to do this in ps, very basic manipulation. (has to be if I can do it!)

    P.S. looking at it on the screen it could probably do with a tiny border as I have
    cut off a bit of the eyebrow and I think the edge needs to be defined a bit.

    Pixelle
    Member

    Like the eye colour but not the mouth.

    brookied
    Participant

    agreed, the mouth makes my boy look like a girl. nice effort though

    shutterbug
    Participant

    Oops! apologies to your little boy :) easy enough to remove
    the lippy……..does he have blue eyes?

    Allinthemind
    Participant

    Those’ll be “Almond shaped” eyes then :) I love eyes.

    Si

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