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  • paperdoll
    Participant

    My daughter had a dressing up party for her 6th birthday recently, and I took these shots of 2 of her guests….I think I may have gone mental with the contrast on the 2nd, and although I was happy with the composition/pose of the first, its obviously not technically brilliant.
    I’ll let you decide.

    Quackles
    Member

    Mental with contrast? No… I actually prefer the second one! Two very lovely little ladies, nicely done! Can’t wait til my kiddy is old enough to pose :)

    jb7
    Participant

    Good stuff Paperdoll,
    charming portraits, both of them,
    and really well lit and processed-

    only really minor niggle is some of the stuff in the background-
    maybe they could both be helped with a tiny understated vignette?

    j

    Allinthemind
    Participant

    lovely expression in the second, agree with JB about a bit of vignette, and maybe dodge the iriss a bit..

    Si

    Pippatee
    Member

    2 great shots which would be lovely printed….

    -I agree though….a subtle vignette would top them off nicely…

    Ali
    Participant

    Aww these are gorgeous Tara, the eyes just say it all :). Very well taken, I think i might boost the contrast in the first. The second shot is my fav. of the two :) Her eyes are incredibly sharp.

    RavenAsh
    Member

    Great portraits paperdoll.
    In the second shot the whiteness on the right shoulder is distracting but overall I like them.

    paperdoll
    Participant

    Thanks for the comments all. I think the advice across the board was to blur out some of the background distractions! I guess I should have copped that !
    Would you just make a selection around your subject, invert and then add blur, or is there a better method?

    T

    Pippatee
    Member

    If you make the selection, invert and then copy to a new layer (ctrl+j), then you apply your blur you have a bit more control over it via opacity and level etc.

    same effect tho…just a bit more adjustable…

    paperdoll
    Participant

    thanks, I’ll give that a go. :D

    jb7
    Participant

    I think it only needs to be toned down a bit- with maybe a little desaturation-
    filter-distort-lens correction-vignette-

    the bokeh is good already-

    j

    DenverDoll
    Participant

    They are both beautiful!

    I love the perfect portrait style of the first, what mother wouldn’t melt over a capture like that?

    I love the expression of the second.

    Two treasures for somebody here :wink:

    paperdoll
    Participant

    Thanks DenverDoll, I was pretty pleased with them otherwise I wouldn’t have posted, so the feedback is appreciated :D

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