Photo shoot 27.07.07

• skywalkerr

  Member

  July 29, 2007 at 1:13 am

  Hi all,

  Comments and suggestions very welcome.
  
  Mark

  Keymaster

  August 17, 2007 at 3:41 pm

  Just noticed your post here. I’m no expert at all on portraiture/fashion
  but the pose together with the closing looks quite awkward.

  I’m not sure which way she is really facing as her legs and face it to the left but
  her body is to the right ?
  Ali

  Participant

  August 19, 2007 at 7:53 pm

  I love the lighting in this – i think it screams high fashion. :) Choice of location is just erfect for the tones in the jacket and skirt. I think the composition lets this one down a bit.
  I love the direction in which the model is facing (really shows off the detail in both garments), but i just find the position of the arms a bit off. I think a bend in her right arm
  would have been perfect.
  skywalkerr

  Member

  August 19, 2007 at 8:09 pm

  Thanks a lot for any suggestion.
  I am trying do my best.That photoshoot was my first ever and wont be last:)
  I will work on it more i mean in next time when i will have chance to do some fashion photography.
  randomway

  Member

  August 19, 2007 at 8:13 pm

  I think, that the background is not doing it’s job, it doesn’t stay in the background, it wants to be equal part of the image. I would like to see the model only without distractions. The lights are very nice and I think, this pose goes well with the dress, both are a bit too complicated and I like them. I think, this is a nice try.