first post

• GerryM

  Participant

  August 2, 2007 at 10:33 pm

  Hi All,

  I’ve just registered and this is my first post. I’m just starting out and I welcome any constructive criticism.
  Took this shot in Dun Laoghaire recently. It was so calm that night. This is exactly as it came off the camera.
  The large green streak is a passing DART.

  
  Gfox

  Participant

  August 3, 2007 at 1:46 pm

  Hi Gerry
  Welcome, as a relative newcomer I can its a great place to learn and get some feedback.. I love this shot, very nicely taken..
  Best of luck
  GerryM

  Participant

  August 3, 2007 at 1:53 pm

  Hi Gfox,

  Thanks for my first ever critigue. Had a look through your phots on Flickr (really must get on there some day) and was well impressed. Specially like some of the B+Ws. Also spotted the Tulip pictures – obviously passed through Moneygall earlier in the summer ??
  FrankC

  Participant

  August 9, 2007 at 7:21 pm

  Hi Gerry,

  I like this – especially the DART trail.
  However, I think it lacks a significant single point of interest.

  Otherwise a very nice shot.

  Frank