I’m surprised no one has commented on this yet Drew as it is a great shot and very well executed. I would probably have called it something like ‘far from the maddening crowd’. He sure looks relaxed.
My initial thoughts are to suggest trying a crop to lose the the forground umbrella’s, however I appereciate that leaves you with a few issues like that pole to clone, and some unnatural shadows to sort out, so perhaps it is best to leave them in.