It’s a nice overall image, but the crop is a bit tight for me. I think the OoF seeds in the centre
would be less obvious if the whole flower was visible. I love the tones in your conversion though.
thanks for the comments guys, I really appreciate the feedback. THe poor flower is half dead, on a wider shot the flower looks limp … heres a wider view
I converted to black and white to try and get a more “end of life” type shot … shooting flowers is a lot more difficult then it appears :D