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Opportunity Wedding Shot
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RavenAshMember
Was at a Wedding at the weekend, so I said I will throw my hat into the ring with this shot.
C&C welcome good or bad. How am I going to learn otherwise. :)Not Pete the blokeParticipantIt’s a nice idea, but looks a bit under-exposed to me? The dresses should be pure white I presume, and they are not showing as white. If you shot in raw, then I would revisit the exposure and try to make the whites whiter. Is that the bride in the top left background? The cuteness factor is what makes the shot needless to say.
Ross
Here is a quick levels adjustment:
https://www.photographyireland.net/album_pic.php?pic_id=1389
RavenAshMemberGreat improvement Ross thanks. :)
brandyman wrote:
Is that the bride in the top left background?
No, she was behind the girls getting ready to enter.
That was one of the little girls mothers’ ready to give them the cue to move.
The impatience of it all can be seen in the arms.Unfortunately didn’t shot it in raw :cry:
PeteTheBlokeMemberLovely moment caught there Ravenash. The way the middle girl is
adjusting herself tells a little story, and the insouciant manner her friend has with
the posy is lovely. Who needs faces to show a person’s character?It’s worth shooting in RAW all the time unless you are going to run out of
card-space. I know it’s a bit of extra work getting shots processed, but it’s
worth it for the chance to drag out extra detail where the jpeg doesn’t
have it. That’s what I’ve found anyway.summerdreamnMembergreat capture. i love how the light falls on the flowers and the contrast against the dresses. totally cute.
RavenAshMemberThanks for the comments Pete & Summerdreamn.
Will have to go down that route with Raw sooner or later, might as well do it sooner.
Just did a slight change on it, not sure if it works out though.
AllinthemindParticipantI prefer the brighter version, I don’t think it needs so much glow effect. I think this would have made a lovely shot with the flowers and the bottom half of the dresses legs. It would show the “Flowers” which they always seem to want in a nice context.
Si
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