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  • Not Pete the bloke
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    Shot during a charity shoot at Galgorm Castle, Ballymena on Saturday. C&C welcome.

    Ross

    randomway
    Member

    I love these. The texture of the dress, the lights, the background, everything works well together. The only thing I don’t like is her blurred hand on the second photo… I think it would be nicer if she held her arm close to herself. Anyways, three interesting photos with a gorgeous model, nice work.

    irishshagua
    Participant

    I like the middle picture. Immediately drawn to the face but not sure about the last one, it just doesn’t work for me. And I don’t like not seeing her face in the first picture. But the images themselves look very well taken just not sure about the poses.

    gerardk
    Participant

    That 2nd one in particular is really strong.

    ryan52
    Member

    The contrast between the rough wall and the smooth models skin is especially striking in the second. Well done.

    terry
    Member

    Hi Brandyman,

    I really like your work. I love the backround for the shots, the colours tone very well with the models dress however as a female the first thing my eye goes to in every shot is the plastic bra straps. It is such a pity she wasn’t comfortable enough to lose them for the shoot. I think no 2 is the best but again the female in me spots the strings from the dress under the arm and what looks like an empty belt loop at the waist. Now maybe I’m just a picky bi*** and if you were to ask me to pose for a shoot I would have to use language because there is no way I could pose like this model. So in the end fair play to her for being up for the challange. Good work all the same.

    Terry

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