Thanks guys for the coments. My goal was to mix the ambient light and the flash and get a natural image. There was plenty of ambient so only a little flast was required.
Soft box in front, umbrella to side and perhaps an sb800 just to trigger the flash units.
Very little post production little contrast, sharpening and some spot healing.
Yeah nice relaxed pose… looks as if she actually is having a conversation on the phone…
A bit too much clutter and distractions though (the mark and reflection on the window, the path, the bit of window ledge and something below it…) Maybe a crop would help, although she is looking that way so you want as much space there as possible I guess) And the left hand side is strange… the cutrain holder and hook is throwing a shadow, and it almost looks like there is PS work blending onto the couch…