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  • Alan Rossiter
    Participant

    Yup – I’m at it again. This is a shot I had taken along with another submission I posted here some months back. At the moment I’m trawling my catalogue for images to hone in on the PS skills. Some would say scraping the barrel. This one I had already toned and pushed a little. I just sharpened it and framed it. I quite like the lines throughout this one. There’s nothing particularly interesting, I just like it.

    OK Joseph, do your worst… :mrgreen:

    Alan.

    sean1098
    Member

    Lovely shot alan,the conv does it justice.It just works,very pleasing to look at.

    Sean.

    Rob
    Member

    I like the lines Alan, though it all seems quite tight and compressed,
    and I just feel I want to zoom out so I can see where the road/lane is
    leading to on the right. I also want to see the upper reaches of the
    building on the left…

    There’s a lot to look at, nice sharp detail throughout, and all the verticals,
    horizontals and diagonals create their own patterns and lead-ins. I also like
    the positioning of the old millstones around the scene. Looks like there might
    be a few stories attached to this place.

    I wouldn’t be a fan of the toning – it’s a little heavily loaded on the yellow
    side. I’ve found primes to be pretty useful for picking antique-type tones using
    a solid colour layer with blending set to colour; for instance Red=17, Green=7, Blue=1, etc…

    Worth another visit to this location I reckon, and definitely worth a wider shot…

    Rob.

    jb7
    Participant

    I couldn’t possibly do my worst Alan-
    you’d never talk to me again-

    So let’s stick to positives-

    I quite like that tall slit window on the left-
    I wonder what that was for-

    And I suppose we’re lucky in that its possible that the toning might have been even heavier-
    I’m not a big fan of overdone sepia-
    a slight hint of a tone is fine,
    but its always been possible to overdo the process,
    even the real thing-

    Apart from that, Rob mentioned it being a bit tight, and I’d agree-
    He’s also found a new use for primes in Photography-
    and I can’t wait to see his paper on that in the BJP :D

    Now Alan,
    that wasn’t so bad :D
    now was it?

    j

    Alan Rossiter
    Participant

    Simply painless. :D

    Yours, and Robs points taken.

    A return, with a wide angle, without a paintbrush and an angle that shows that the slit was actually a boarded doorway that was lost in the angle of view.

    Alan

    Rob
    Member

    jb7 wrote:

    He’s also found a new use for primes in Photography-
    and I can’t wait to see his paper on that in the BJP :D
    j

    :lol:

    They’ve already requested a brief draft and I’m working on it right now…

    Well you may snigger Joseph, but, joking aside, I’m finding more and more that I can get
    fairly convincing and quite pleasing duotones, without destroying tonal range,
    by using this method. There’s just something about primes…

    Rob.

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