dreaming girl

• mylesrants

  Participant

  March 10, 2008 at 3:41 pm

  too dark?
  
  pihjin

  Member

  March 10, 2008 at 7:31 pm

  In my opinion yes, too dark.
  And the box (?) by her foot is a little distracting too. I’d also consider cropping out the space on the right hand side but to be honest maybe just take this advice on board for the next time instead.
  mylesrants

  Participant

  March 11, 2008 at 10:02 am

  yes too dark will get the treatments case out

  the box is a bag she is carrying…thus proving point to dark to make out