Homepage › Forums › Photo Critique › Landscape › Jetty This topic is empty. Jetty BrickeeParticipant April 16, 2008 at 4:14 pm Just a Jetty on on the river. B&W verison Jim cathaldParticipant April 17, 2008 at 10:21 pm Like the mono Jim maybe a little more water on the LHS might help a little Cathal BrickeeParticipant April 17, 2008 at 10:24 pm More water would have helped but I diden’t have any :) I will revisit this place again and see what I can do. Jim Jay KingParticipant April 17, 2008 at 10:37 pm The colour one for me… but maybe needs a bit more “umph” with contrast and colour!? I like the composition – rocks leading you out. Works for me, nice one. BrickeeParticipant April 18, 2008 at 1:30 am Thank you Jay King, I actually toned it down to ease the HDR effect. Jim -Oy-Participant April 18, 2008 at 6:50 am No1 for me. I like the light and the composition is ok. What would improve it and bring the eye back in considering the tight left side, is another focal point. Someone in there looking out to sea maybe. BrickeeParticipant April 18, 2008 at 5:51 pm Thanks for your comments Oy. JIm Viewing 7 posts - 1 through 7 (of 7 total) You must be logged in to reply to this topic.