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Phoenix Park and around

irishshagua
Participant

April 22, 2008 at 1:01 pm

Not sure if they’re all landscapes but sure in all in anyways….

C&C appreciated.

Cheers
Brian

Roberto
Member

April 22, 2008 at 5:30 pm

I would go more for cityscapes… except the third one, it’s enviromental photo (what we don’t have here… maybe some suggestion for Mark?) … IMO

I like the first photo but I would change it to monochrome and add blur around the steps….

ka1mi
Participant

April 22, 2008 at 5:45 pm

These are fantastic. Love the last one. Great work.

nfl-fan
Participant

April 22, 2008 at 5:51 pm

#2 for me there’s a contrasting blend of features… train, apartments, tree’s… it’s just very different… can’t quite put my finger on it though.

The trees in #4 look like the may have even made a nice shot on their own.

What is that burnt out rubble in #3.. a motorbike?

irishshagua
Participant

April 22, 2008 at 5:53 pm

Cheers for looking everyone.

Yeah tis a motorbike. Was just left there scorched. Kind oif ruining the area. Ah well.

Not sure about the blur on the first photo Roberto. Doesn’t do much for me. Conversion is grand but I wanted to keep them all colour. Cheers for the suggestions though.

Thanks
Brian

Brickee
Participant

April 22, 2008 at 9:34 pm

Brian, my pic is #3, Unusual and it draws my attn.

Jim

Rob
Member

April 22, 2008 at 9:43 pm

Two and four for me Brian. I’m afraid I don’t see much in the burnt
out motorcycle, and those steps need a glamourous model or something
to make them appealing…

Rob.

irishshagua
Participant

April 23, 2008 at 1:20 pm

Cheers Jim, Rob. Thanks for looking and the advice.

Brian

RavenAsh
Member

April 23, 2008 at 4:37 pm

Shot 4 stands out for me.

#1 would look good in B&W IMO.

irishshagua
Participant

April 23, 2008 at 4:49 pm

Cheers. Was worried that the Halo was too apparent on number 4.

Thanks for looking
Brian

JMac-2006
Participant

April 26, 2008 at 2:03 pm

unusual set of a familiar place.

#2 stands out i think with its unusual varied subject matter, nice colours and timing to add train to the composition
#4 is good take on what i find a difficult subject to photograph well – in fact i havent been able to do well would be more true :( – you already mentioned the halo which is a pity

#1 agree with Rob – you need a nice model there to add interest
#3 real environmental shot (little gurriers) – if there where a couple of deer on the crest of the hill i think this would be stronger image as it is it doesnt really stack up

anyhows thats my take for what its worth

irishshagua
Participant

April 26, 2008 at 2:29 pm

JMac-2006 wrote:

unusual set of a familiar place.

Cheers :D

Thanks for the comments on all the shots. Some good help in there.

Deebo
Participant

April 26, 2008 at 4:50 pm

Im with rob too, 4th shot is my pic o the bunch

wayneleone
Member

April 27, 2008 at 11:39 am

Number 2 for me. Lots of interest and detail. Then number 4 – good composition. The other 2 are good too.

irishshagua
Participant

May 3, 2008 at 3:32 pm

Cheers Dee and Wayne thanks for looking. appreciate the comments.