Just basically going to say the same as POM.
You got a great moment there, looks like he is crooning bigtime. the composition/poise is spot on for me.
But the reds in the window are very distracting.
If you don’t mind photoshopping you could carefully select the dresses/tops and turn the colour to brown or something.
Great photo though.
Martin
PS nice bit of gear you acquired, good luck with it