Hi Emma
Im guessing its a one light set up? I find the mood to be interesting kinda dark..Would have liked to see more in the eyes or eye,sometimes i find when trying this type of portraiture a silver brolley is great to create a hard light bring out more texture in the skin and whiteining the eye. I find the hand distracting would prefer it either fully in the frame or not at all. Nice work though :wink:
Ben