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lovely expressions in both
The first could be sharper ont he near side – your DoF is a touch too shallow I think .. still though its very engaging
The second . my big niggle is that you have her back to the light ??? this means there is no light in her eyes – her hair is a touch burned out , her skin looks grey and you’ve sligtly over whitened her teeth .. If this sounds over criticcal I’m sorry -just trying to give you an idea of what to be aware of
… was there something in particular you needed feedback on ?
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Cheers Lorraine
The first one should be sharper on the near side all right. The second one i only used photoshop just to convert to greyscale , nothing esle was done to it.
Thanks for your comments tho, will take them on board.
stephen
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