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Decrepit glasshouse
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Do you have more from this location?
It looks like a very idiosyncratic first picture of a subject like this-
I can just about make out some of the structure in the background,
and it looks like the photographic possibilities- pattern, contrast, texture, composition- light even,
are immense-so why this small detail?
I suppose it’s not an ‘urban landscape’, so it must be architecture- is it?
I might hold off on the critique for the moment, maybe see if there are any more to come…
joseph
I just assumed it was architecture as it was of a structure.
I have a series from this location (the botanic gardens), I will try get some more up later!
As requested here is the series I took. May be too many images for one post, sorry if there is:
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or 7 in colour
I think we’re still missing the bigger picture here-
we’re only seeing a couple of scales,
there isn’t really a scene setter, either inside or out-I quite like the second, it’s beginning to show the layers of the building…
and the fourth shows that there’s something inside,
and we know you’ve been in there-What strikes me most is that these pictures seem to be more about finding unusual views than really describing the building in a legible way-
and even after seeing all of these, I don’t really know what the building looks like-Not that that’s important, I suppose…
joseph
I think I was just looking for unusual view points more so than telling a story or setting a scene. I understand what you are saying though, and I have included a picture of the outside of the building to try and appease you somewhat :lol:
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