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Cement Factory Sunset
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Nice image sirvad.
I dont like to warm/orange feel to this.
Were you going for a sunset type look here?I would have left that out or possible not as strong.
I feel with this type of shot with the rapeseed dominating
so much of the foreground that it is not sufficiently
illuminated. it is just a little too dark.Maybe if the foreground was brightened it would balance
the orange sky a little.Again I still like the image but it could be stronger.
Alan
Nice shot and great feedback from Alan.
I do like the mix of nature and industry, it works well to contrast against eachother.
I agree that this does feel a tad to warm and maybe life the foreground
DeeI agree. This has the potential to be an outstanding image but it’s a little overcooked for my tastes.
This photo has great potential. Love the composition and you’ve got a great sky there. This version is much better than the warm tone but it still feels a little pushed in the processing of the foreground. Do you have this in RAW?
Convert the industrial area to B/W and add some curves to it for contrast, it’ll help separate it more from the rapeseed.
had another go at this one. Please let me know if it look ok or which of the 3 ye like best, Cheers.
p.s. if any of ye PS experts want to have a go at messing about, would love to see what ye come up with.
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