A few from the Algarve, Portugal

• freddie59

  Participant

  June 7, 2009 at 2:10 pm

  

  

  

  
  b318isp

  Participant

  June 9, 2009 at 3:48 pm

  Freddie, not a bad series – here’s a few critiques:

  1. Needs to be vertical, it’s leaning to the left
  2. Needs a bit of work to get it to jump out, the lighting is flat
  3. Lovely colours, just the path is cut off at the bottom, which the eye is drawn to. If you could have used the path as a lead in to one of the buildings in the background, it would have helped
  4. Not sure about this, there is nothing particualrily wrong, just not that interesting. Perhaps if you had something included in the foreground, it would eb better balanced
  freddie59

  Participant

  June 10, 2009 at 11:45 am

  b318isp wrote:

  Freddie, not a bad series – here’s a few critiques:

  1. Needs to be vertical, it’s leaning to the left
  2. Needs a bit of work to get it to jump out, the lighting is flat
  3. Lovely colours, just the path is cut off at the bottom, which the eye is drawn to. If you could have used the path as a lead in to one of the buildings in the background, it would have helped
  4. Not sure about this, there is nothing particualrily wrong, just not that interesting. Perhaps if you had something included in the foreground, it would eb better balanced

  Thanks for that. :)