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The Paul Toal Band

  • robmgra
    Member

    I was asked to photograph a music festival 2 weeks ago. Heres a shot that stood out to me.

    C&C welcome :)

    5faythe
    Participant

    Hi Rob,

    You have captured a nice expressive portrait there.

    There is quite a bit of what to me looks like wasted space
    at the top of the image.
    I would crop down near the top of the head.

    The face looks a little soft to me but I’m not always right on focussing. :)

    I like it for all that.

    Cheers.

    John.

    robmgra
    Member

    Cheers John.

    The face is a tad soft…but sharp enough that im happy with it.he caught me off gaurd when he did this – he came right up in my face as i was snapping the other guitar player.

    The crop you suggested i think works better too.

    Heres another from the gig :)

    5faythe
    Participant

    Well done Rob.

    I think that’s better.

    I’m going to be cheeky and suggest even cropping closer
    to the cap.
    Just a small bit of space above the cap, the singer fills the frame and
    gets all the viewers attention. :?

    Bingo.

    Cheers.

    John.

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