Samuel Becket bridge

• mnixon

  Participant

  October 25, 2009 at 12:05 am

  Sunset over Dublin city a few weeks ago, would love your thoughts on it :)

  
  pallotron

  Participant

  October 25, 2009 at 9:30 am

  Hi,

  i would rotate counterclockwise to get the bridge straight. i would have zoomed a bit to keep off the picture the street lamp on the foreground.
  Like the sky!
  randomway

  Member

  October 25, 2009 at 10:14 am

  It needs much tighter framing, less saturation, brightening and straightening up.
  mnixon

  Participant

  October 26, 2009 at 7:37 am

  thanks for the comments guys, I’ve been messing around with lightroom3 having not used any image editing software before, I’ll have another go at it later and post up
  loustalotphotography

  Participant

  October 31, 2009 at 7:45 pm

  Hi guys,

  The title being the bridge, I find the foreground confusing : the people, the lamppost and the ramp (although I believe its purpose is to guide the spectator).

  These kind of skies and colors are pretty exiting and we easily jump on. I detect a reflection on the water, perhaps something you should explore during the shoot.
  Anyway, you have plenty of details in the picture. It will be easy to reframe.

  I hope you don’t mind, I took the liberty to do this (I didn’t take the time to straighten the bridge and I because I think to top of the picture doesn’t add anything I would crop on the lovely spotted clouds) :

  
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