summer evening

• sprigs

  Member

  January 21, 2010 at 9:31 am

  
  taken from my front door faceing south towards the Dublin Wicklow mountains with canon 5d 24-105 lens
  phillip

  Member

  January 21, 2010 at 10:19 am

  the foreground is to dark, either brighten it up or crop it out, the green fields look unnatural, clouds look good. :wink:
  phillip
  sprigs

  Member

  January 21, 2010 at 11:24 am

  thanks for the comments Phillip will take them on board
  richieb

  Member

  January 22, 2010 at 1:00 am

  That is a nice sky, so I would crop out the dark forground to make the sky more the subject. Nice colours on the field :D
  5faythe

  Participant

  January 24, 2010 at 10:34 am

  Hi John,

  This is quite a nice country scene.
  There is a nice cloudy sky and the pattern of the fields is attractive.

  It looks on here that maybe you have shoved the saturation slider a little
  too far as the colour looks a little false.

  The foreground does look a little blocked up.
  You could try, selectively, to bring a little detail back into this area.
  Too much of a lighten could introduce noise an look unnatural but worth a try.

  Again it looks like it is sloping to the left but again it could be me. :D

  Cheers.

  John.