Similar to your original Alan. Not that thats bad of course :)
I really like the exposure used. I tried to quickly take something similar in France myself last year
and made a bags of it. Didn’t get the same look as you did…. will try again this year :)
Lovely shot. Theres a great depth to it, with each character a different story. The jumping girl, couple in the middle and the almost mannequin like figure closest to the front. I think I prefer this to your original one…!