Sunrise in Castleknock

• Kells

  Participant

  March 2, 2010 at 9:02 pm

  Hi there I’m new to photography and took my first landscape shots on my new dslr this morning. All feedback good or bad welcome…[img]Kells
  RASMITH32

  Member

  March 2, 2010 at 9:13 pm

  not bad for a 1st run! They’re nice pics. The only thing I would say is what is the main focus of the picture ?, its not apparent . The 1st picture is betterof the two and is nice and sharp but I would definitely look at the composition of the shot. For example, a better composition (for me) would have been to capture the full bunker to the front such that the bunkers ran up to the cloud in the sky, or up to the sun if it was a tad higher
  Kells

  Participant

  March 2, 2010 at 9:19 pm

  I agree Rasmith I did’nt think about the composition I was a bit trigger happy ! Thanks for the advice. Hopefully I can take it on board for future outings.

  Kells
  Kells

  Participant

  March 2, 2010 at 10:02 pm

  Here is a similar picture ..any improvement ? Kells