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Doonbeg beach
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Nice one, looks well sharpened-
I think that less saturation in the sky might be better,
might give more prominence to the grass-
Good light-This is a cool shot, not what I expected from the title (wheres the beach dude?).
The sky looks nearly too good to be true, so maybe reign it back a bit?
The other thing that trickled through my mind was a high contrast B&W conversion?
Regardless though, I love it!
I’ve come back to this a couple of times,
It’s a fine shot alright,
The sky wouldn’t be a problem for me,it gives a nice contrast to the golden grass colour,
But, and it’s a small But, I can’t help thinking a step or two backwards might have made a slightly better composition,
I get the feeling that the first pole is a little cramped into the frame.
Overall though, it’s a fine effort.The fences are interesting, particularly with their similarity to the grass, but for me the shot is over-processed – too vivid and sharp.
I like this shot , in particular the contrasting softness of the sky against the hardeness of the shapened grass/fence. Nice shot. When I saw 1st I thought it would be a nice B&W shot so took the liberty of converting. Think it stands up well in B&W
RASMITH32 wrote:
I like this shot , in particular the contrasting softness of the sky against the hardeness of the shapened grass/fence. Nice shot. When I saw 1st I thought it would be a nice B&W shot so took the liberty of converting. Think it stands up well in B&W
Yeah I like that too.
I have a less saturated version aswell. will post that too.oh yea !
love the composition Peter, well thought out!
I think the mono shades it for me just ahead of the colour.well done
Hi Peter,
I love this type of photograph.
I like the colour but I think it suits a mono conversion.I tend to agree with Paul that including more of the foreground pole might have been better.
All in all it’s a lovely scene and I photograph I’d be very happy to have taken.
Well done.
John.
i agree with the above it certainly lends itself better to a mono conversion.
I hear you all, but i’m still sitting on the fence with this.
So i decided to meet you half or at least 1 quarter of the way. :wink:
Maybe I need more time.Hi Peter
Really like this one and its colour for me. Maybe the first ones foreground with the less saturated sky from the last one.
Gary
Same here, i agree with Paul, if the first post was full in the frame it would sit better balanced
Fine effort
Dee
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