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First attempt at Fashion

  • swingking
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    b318isp
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    I know little about Fashion photography, but my thoughts are:

    – shots are well lit with good colour and use of shadow
    – I’m unclear on what the subject is (for fashion in these shots, is it about the clothes, red necklace or the model?)
    – the backgrounds draw the eye away from the model
    – in the 2nd, one eye should have the dominant focus point

    slang61
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    I would be of the same opinion as b318isp. I think in both the photos the background is distracting and serves no purpose.
    in number one a tighter crop might work better and in number two a different angle to exclude that distracting background.
    The shots are nicely exposed though.

    STU

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