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Hint of nudity
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I’ll have a go.
It’s certainly a shot that keeps you looking. I like the noise
and the feeling of darkness. The row of lights on the right
suggests a dressing-room, backstage feel, which sets the
imagination going. The model is very attractive and her angular
jaw lends to the intriguing nature of the shot – she certainly
doesn’t have the appearance of a stripper, more a Shakespearean
actress or a Wagnerian singer. Maybe I’m getting too fanciful?What’s that horrid rectangle of light in the middle? You’re far too
much of a pro to photograph your own flash unit… aren’t you?Thanks for the critique.. The bright thing is the chrome end of the arm of the chair…
Si
Wow, Pete said it really, not getting too fanciful, I think. But that rectangular is a bit disturbing alright.
Brilliant shot, love it!
Also maybe if you had gone a bit more to the right.would have liked to see more of her right hand in the reflection perhaps..just a thought of a beginner. Still good in my eyes! :)Si, I think that this will become a PI classic. Great light both in terms of the reflected face and the out of focus arm/face etc…
The reflected arm chair end is a little bit of a distraction, easily dealt with though and doesn’t take away from the overall feel of the photograph.Anyhow, its a winner :)
Hi Si,
This looks a fine photograph to my eye.
On first viewing Jerry Hall and Roxy Music came
into my head ….. not 100% sure why.Nice.
John.
Thanks folks, The chrome end of the chair seems to be too dominant, I thought it would be balanced by the dots in te top corners. I shall tone it down a bit :)
Many thanks
Si
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