I like the first one here, much better than 2 in my opinion. Of all the shots I like it best, but the right side is a bit dead, a slightly different composition more involving the guys on the left, keeping the neon background, might have made it even better.
Number 3 is let down by the having subjects front and centre but poorly lit. I’m always looking for interesting places (good backgrounds) where people pass bright shop fronts etc. It isn’t easy.
1 and 3 capture the energy of the place.
I think this is missing from number 4 which might be the best shot technically.