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  • kickozz
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    robmgra
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    i dont get the title of this…did you mean surfer? and by surfer do you mean that tiny person thats just a distraction in the right hand side pf the photo?

    straighten up the horizon and ya have a decent enough shot.

    aoluain
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    nicw simple shot, i like this but you should straighten the horizon!

    markclehane
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    I think this shot proves the old adage of “less is more” but I feel it could be improved with 1 or 2 tweaks.
    1. As already mentioned, straighten the horizon and clone out the surfer(?)
    2. For my liking it’s just a little too dark at the bottom. If it was a little lighter I think it would look a bit more balanced.
    I’m ok with borders as well but I wonder if it’s taking away from the image in this case. Maybe?
    Anyway, I’d love to see this photo re-posted with corrections done.

    kickozz
    Participant

    mistakes corrected…is it better?

    markclehane
    Participant

    Definitely improved it. I really like the colours and simplicity of this shot. Hate to be picky, but one tiny thing I missed first time- I’d also remove that light coloured pebble or shell at the foot. Seems to stand out more everytime I look at it :D

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