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First try at fashion photography
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I’ve very new to this website and just trying to get the hang of it. This is my first attempt at fashion photography. Constructive criticism? Sorry that the pictures are so large.
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I like the composition on the 1st, 4th and last shot. Some of the other are more still life rather than fashion. I do think that all the shots are abit soft, so would be interested in what you used.
These have quite a grungy hipster feel to them. The first and the forth are by far the strongest of the set,the first would be much better with a bit off the bottom, I think as it is, her legs lead the eye right off the page, I might be tempted to take a bit off the top too, cropping out the brightest flower.
The little dark patch of material in the bottom right corner is quite off putting as is the wee dongle of thread hanging from the headband.
Just little things, but they could make a big difference, like I said, two very strong pictures.Not sure about the others, the hairbrush and the dust on the hanger are a bit too beyond grungy for my taste.
Sinead
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