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  • Patrick Amharc
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    Feel free to comment – not just watch :-

    RASMITH32
    Member

    Very Natural which is good BUT the composition doesnt work for me. The model is too central and the sink to the left is distracting, I would also crop just below the left (as you look at it)small finger nail.

    clami79
    Participant

    sorry but this one doesn’t work for me.
    very bad crop, don’t like to see someone chopped that way imho..
    as Ras said the sink and her underwear are distracting and i’m not sure to which jewelery you refer to.

    Patrick Amharc
    Participant

    Thank for confirming my doubts about the sink – will try a square one… still axed :( sorry Clami

    tsergairl
    Member

    Hi Patrick

    U see, idea is ok but, IMO this photo looks like raw from the camera, maybe use some addition art processing in PS, if i can suggest:
    1) use gaussian blur to change a little skin texture
    2) use the stamp tool and delete panties
    3) the center part of left breast, i think is a little too bright (maybe on my screen)

    can i ask what F/? did you use ??

    Chris

    Patrick Amharc
    Participant

    Hi Chris,

    The picture was taken at f/22.

    No sink no pants, ok guys. I too think the hand is enough to close to composition. About the skin texture, I prefer a picture with it although it’s not the trend of the moment.

    Thank you for your help, I’ll soon post a reprocess picture.

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