Danger Keep Away

• Jonny288

  Participant

  March 26, 2011 at 1:21 am

  Just happened upon this today and thought it might be a good shot.

  
  thalpin

  Member

  March 27, 2011 at 4:43 pm

  A good opportunity for an incidental morality lesson in that photo for sure. The “Danger: Keep Away” sign appearing to be directed at both the alcohol as well as the people’s blindness of risk that resulted is a good composition – however the large green pole to the right I think takes away from the subject matter – being such a strong colour in comparison to the grays of the wall & electricity box. I would be interested to see any alternative crops of that shot that reduce or eliminate the presence of the green tube/pole.
  Jonny288

  Participant

  March 27, 2011 at 9:32 pm

  Thanks thalpin for your comment. I have played around with the pic and this the most I dared to crop it to

  
  thalpin

  Member

  March 27, 2011 at 10:59 pm

  Great – the crop and straighten definitely increases the urgency/warning of the Danger sign, and more readily points to the bottles as being central to the photo I think
  Jonny288

  Participant

  March 28, 2011 at 12:04 am

  I agree, I think it has improved the pic, really appreciate your input :D