Thoughts –
Maybe a little ccw ?
And a bit of space at the bottom?
More light in front and less at one side, say?
And if the parasol were to take up the colour of some of the sweets instead of introducing another colour?
Thanks Pixelle.
This isn’t my normal sort of thing & it’s good to see what needs to be done to improve it. I’m not too comfortable with using flash & especially multi-flashes, so practice is definitely in order. I found the glass very difficult to work with because of glare & highlights. Luckily, the subject doesn’t run or fly away, so I can try again. Cheers. :D