Love these types of shots. Certainly ones you tend to look back on with fondness. The 1st is super , would love to see her feet though and a small bit of sharpening.
The 2nd again super. Has an almost 70’s feel to it
I agree with Ras there. Perhaps crop a small bit off the top of the first one might be good. Although if you want to
keep the 645 format then you can’t do without cropping a bit off the left also.
I agree about the feet in the first one. Unfortunately, she was nearly running towards me at the time and it was grab the shot or not! I’ll see what I can do with cropping it.
First shot cropped in a lot closer – can’t do anything about the feet unfortunately but there’s a lot less wasted space now. I purposefully cropped in to the left as well to try and emphasize her movement into the shot. Not sure if it worked … Opinions?