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Taken last Spring on a 10sec timer and ran (then walked) into pic.
400d f10 iso200.all C&C’s more thank welcome pls.
joewhats going on in the top left????? looks like ya popped a few clouds in. Nice image when ya sort that out !
Hi Sirvad, thanks for highlighting it, didn’t see it like that… it may look like that but i wouldn’t be bothered..dark clouds rolling into it i thought gave the image an air of foreboding.
Point taken mate.
joeVery nice image Joe, maybe just sort out the top left hand corner.
Dave.
as already stated it is a nice image….but definitely sort out that top left hand corner….all the attention is dragged up there trying to work out what the shape is , never mind why its part of the shot!
I like it Joey, its a nice composition but automatically the eye is drawn to the left. It does look like something that may have been overly burned at first but looking at it again you can see the cloud bank.
Nice capture.
Sorry Joey, must have been half a sleep when I looked at this image earlier today. I can now see the cloud clearly but in my defence it does look a bit strange.
Dave.
Cheers folks for good critique, and Jenny i laughed out load when i saw the big face.
I went back and toned down the Blues and brushed a bit of exposure to the offensive area…That looks a lot nicer.
At first glance the other shot looked like something was superimposed onto it, this looks more natural.Thanks Beasley, glad y’all highlighted that, i put this up in the club and that prob wasn’t picked up by anyone.
Cheers again.
joe.
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