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Just wondering how you think I could do better with these, its for a project for class
Hi,
Great set to start with but you took the images in harsh light, most need the brightness reduced, the second of the lone boat might work in B&W,
No1 one has a nice reflection but is just a little to bright, No3 again is a little bright, the sky looks as though it has detail in it that could be improved. Keep at it you’re nearly there oh! and well done for getting out to take them and for posting them afterwards.No1..The sky lets it down, quite harsh light, the composition is good though maybe a little more
space around the church, I like the tree, watch your vertical lines it looks like it is tilted a little.No2..I like this it is kind of an upside down view, with the reflections of the buildings in the water,
would crop a little off the top just to the top of the grass maybe, to get rid of the wire, again the
light wasn’t great but the composition is nice, and the blue/green of the boat makes the picture pop.No.3..Nice scene, maybe a tad dark on the right hand side of the frame, it is all about where the
light is and what direction, would be worth revisiting when the light is better.No.4..Watch your levels, although the stone to the left looks straight the bridge over the river looks
a little crooked, needs a bit more space over the the bridge too I think.No.5..Really nice scene, and you can see what I mean about the light in this one better, the houses are
lit up by the sun, and the bridge is in shadow, again watch your levels.A good set of shots, that just need a little bit of tweeking here and there, you have a good eye for a scene and
your composition is good. Just watch for good light it can make or break a shot, all the above are only my
opinions of course, hope it is been some help. :)
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