That is a nice shot, the only thing I would say is the very bright area on
top of the frame takes away from it a little, I think you could afford to crop
a tad more off the top to eliminate it a little?
as you can see the camera was not focusing on the eyes, what i would think the focus point was set at her right arm which is perfectly sharp. And yes i would agree with the previous reply.
Jenny many thanks for taking the time to look and comment – appreciate it – I personally prefer the pic just as it is – but thats the beauty of photography – there is no wrong choice :-)