Very nice, l think though the second would work better with just a bit cropped off
the right side, or maybe if there was a bit more on the left it would balance it better,
but two very nice shots, a little reflector would have sorted the “dark” side of the
face in the second shot.
Thanks for your comments. I really need to keep checking on the need to add in a reflector and to check my composition as my photoshoots are underway.
Charley
It was actually quite easy, the background was a black sheet, with a set of christmas lights clipped on with cloths pegs. Keep Model as far a possible from the background, my girls were about 10 feet (at least) then shoot away