Night City Landscapes

• beans1981

  Participant

  March 6, 2012 at 10:07 am

  Hi,

  Just wondering what you think of the two below and any thing to add to maybe make them better..? Probably loads to add!!
  The second one i think is too dark..

  1. Four Courts Dublin
  

  2. Customs House Dublin
  

  Thanks,
  Al
  alpaca

  Participant

  March 6, 2012 at 11:29 am

  Two very nice shots I think. In the first shot the in the top right is distracting, try re compose shot its not such a distraction or bring a chainsaw ;) haha But it’s nicely exposed. Longer exposure on the second one so it’s not so bright. Well done on both.
  beans1981

  Participant

  March 6, 2012 at 2:50 pm

  Thanks for the comments, looking at that top corner on No.1 now I do see how the tree is distracting.. And yep No.2 needs a little more work but good to get a 2nd pair of eyes on the case!

  Thanks,
  Al
  insertnamehere

  Participant

  March 6, 2012 at 6:11 pm

  Very nice! The first has the edge for me, I like the colour and composition…the trees are a bit distracting maybe but I don’t find them too bad.

  The second is underexposed I think. You seem to have some distortion in the first shot…your verticals are not straight…might be worth trying to correct in photoshop…apart from that very nice!

  Mark.
  fguihen

  Participant

  March 6, 2012 at 7:31 pm

  four courts is great. you got the nice blue sky just after sunset. Great image. I would have tried this a little farther back, and leaning as far over the wall as i safely could to eliminate both the grey triangle in the bottom right and the tree. minor arguement though.

  2nd one is defo underexposed. I would get closer and leave out that tall building.
  beans1981

  Participant

  March 6, 2012 at 8:18 pm

  Thanks for the comments, very helpful for the next time I am out composing somethin and to correct the current ones. Will take them under advisement.

  Thanks,
  Al