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Capturing emotion
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Hey, lads
I’m pretty new here so decided to put up one of my works for your judgement :)
Had a shoot few weeks back with one lady, idea was to capture moment with emotion. And thats what i have :)
p.s. equipment: Nikon D7000 + 50mm 1.8G + 17-55 2.8
I think 1 & 3 are lovely captures but trying to figure out what’s going on in the
background in No’ 2. I’m just wondering if that is a post in No’ 3?
If it is I would be inclined to remove it. Well done!John17 wrote:
I think 1 & 3 are lovely captures but trying to figure out what’s going on in the
background in No’ 2. I’m just wondering if that is a post in No’ 3?
If it is I would be inclined to remove it. Well done!Hi, John,
didnt get your idea for removing image No. 2?
Cant see anything wrong there….Virtus
Hi and welcome to PI a lovely set of photos and I think the order you have placed them here is how I would have judged
them. Lovely DOF in all three getting you to focus on the main pictures of a very pretty model.
I think John means remove what looks like a white post in number 3 not No 2 completely. Although with the DOF it doesn’t really put me off.Keep them coming.
Soda
Nice set, nice model, nice colours, nice DOF. I wonder if cropping the top of her head might have been avoided & still be successful? Well done
ps: #2 is my favouriteCropping was left this way to focus viewers sight to eyes, had this idea when editing photos ;) p.s. thanks for good words :)
Hi Nerijus,
Welcome to PI and I hope you find the site a useful resource.
You have made a great start with the first 3 images you have posted.I too love the colour.
Your use of Dof is also excellent.Very nice and I look forward to seeing many more.
All the best,
John.
5faythe wrote:
Hi Nerijus,
Welcome to PI and I hope you find the site a useful resource.
You have made a great start with the first 3 images you have posted.I too love the colour.
Your use of Dof is also excellent.Very nice and I look forward to seeing many more.
All the best,
John.
Thanks John, for nice words :)
I already have few upcoming :)three lovely shots ….great d.o.f and colour. one thing i might say is that the model looks more contemplative than emotional
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