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  • WIFT
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    Technically not great but they appeal to me…Any critique hugely appreciated.

    1) This chap is often sat in Newcastle city centre reading the Indo. I like the sign on the bench and the lad at the end meself:

    2) Snapped these lads running through the streets of Granada:

    5faythe
    Participant

    Hi Liam,

    I wouldn’t be an expert on what makes a good street photograph but I have a couple of thoughts.

    The subject in #1 looks like a bit of a character and could makes for an interesting photographic subject.
    The conversion looks good to me.
    I’m a bit of a pain about keeping lines straight if at all possible and the sloping bench screams at me here.

    I love the colours in #2.
    I would try a crop to just above the urn on the LHS and to the left of t he gate on the RHS.
    The frame would be then filled with colour and the runners would be placed slightly more to the LHS of the frame.
    Just a thought and not a criticism.

    Two nice pictures.

    John.

    WIFT
    Member

    Hi John,

    Thanks for the advice and encouragement – much appreciated – looking back, I can’t believe I missed that sloping bench!

    Cheers,

    Liam.

    andybenitez
    Participant

    Is that Liam Smith?

    Like the first one, he looks like the sort of character that you could do close-up on without him even realising.

    Had to look at the second one a few times and think the graffiti on the wall makes the image

    Hope all is well

    Andy

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