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Hey everyone,
Did not publish anything in long time, so its time to do it, recent shoot with Dorotha. Constructive critique always welcome.1.
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Thanks for your time !
i really like this set of images, the model is very photogenic and she seems relaxed and very natural. i don’t know much about this kind of photography but i noticed a couple of things…
in 1 there is a bit of leaf or something stuck to her leg… i think i would reduce the pink tones in her skin and the dappled shadow on her left shoulder and arm doesn’t really work for me…
other than that i think they’re great!
Hey Isabella,
Thanks for reply.
What is stuck to her leg is a tattoo, she asked not to remove it in post production by any means.
I never noticed this shadow before, I will be careful next time with things like that.Thanks !
ah right, tattoo explains it! I thought it seemed a bit too obvious to overlook!
keep up the good work!
I really like number 4 & 5…
No. 1 seems to be a little out of focus or perhaps a little excessive with blur in post processing. Not sure.
Hey Dan,
No blurring in post processing ;)) it could be slightly out of focus, as i find working with d90 like a pain in the…. ;))) Tried to squeeze out as much as i can from this camera, unfortunately, sometimes was making mistakes. I picked this image anyway as a personal like.
Thanks !
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