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Bray Air Display one or two!
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Hi All,
Not sure where these would go so Catch all seems the best place. Don’t really do fast moving so dusted off the super lens for these.. Only a couple here..1.
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Some are probably a bit soft but hopefully not too bad.
Hi Alan,
I like #1 best here.
Despite the fact that the plane is placed in the centre of the frame it looks fine to me.
I like that we can see the pilot too.I’m no expert on this type of photography but #2 and #3 don’t have the same impact on me for some reason.
With #2 I think it’s look a little cluttered, maybe not as clean a composition as #1.
I find the oof spectators distracting too.I find #3 a little cluttered too with the slightly oof vehicle and the arm.
I think I can see why you included the vehicle as it has a connection to the helicopter.
I think it would have been better if you had either concentrated on the helicopter or taken a wider view
to include the vehicle.Just my opinion of course.
Cheers,
John.
Hi John,
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
I will go back and see if there is anything I can do with the crops. Might have a few with different angles too.Yes, spot on, was leaving the vehicle in as it was in relation to the helicopter but wasn’t able to crop out the mans arm! It is a tight crop too..
Thanks again,
AlUpdate a couple here: Hopefully for the better. Thanks again for the comments.
Just a bit of re-cropping and for #3 dug out another image..1.
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4. Extra, a little less cluttered than 2 above. Might not be as good an image though.
Thanks,
AlThe second of the first set is my favorite. Fantastic shot, great timing and perfect DoF. Well done!
Thanks for taking the time to comment. Probably would have been better if they were turning toward me but happy with the result!
Al
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