Pondering

• beans1981

  Participant

  July 23, 2012 at 8:23 pm

  Hi All,
  Not sure if this is in the right section but would love to know what you think.. I was passing by this man sitting on the seat pondering and thought it was interesting.. The image is probably a little soft and is probably down to me rusing and not prepared!!

  

  Not sure but I may prefer it in B+W.
  Thanks for looking.
  Al
  streetshooter

  Member

  July 24, 2012 at 10:54 am

  Nice idea, and a couple of suggestions: the shot needs to be much brighter and contrasting, and I’d like to see a more off-centre subject.

  :)

  ss
  beans1981

  Participant

  July 24, 2012 at 6:14 pm

  Thanks ss,
  Yea was going for the bench off Center but see what you mean. Thanks will take on board.

  Looks a whole lot darker than what I though it did too!

  a bit brighter and re-crop. Highlights are blown out a little bit.. Have to be more prepared next time!

  

  Al
  streetshooter

  Member

  July 25, 2012 at 7:44 am

  That’s look a lot better Al – I find it easier to critique than to post my own ;)

  Keep on clickin!

  ss
  sndipo

  Member

  July 25, 2012 at 9:50 am

  Second shot much better. Good to see someone got useful tips and it turned in a nicer-looking image! :)