i think its interesting, i like the framing. i think it might be improved by chopping off the bottom just below the red writing though as the space above looks a little cramped and makes me want to be able to shove the frame up a bit
I too like the framing and I like the color. One thing that distracts me is that you are at a slight angle. I think I would have preferred this shot more if you had shuffled a little to the right and made the shot more face on.
Had a look at this on flickr. Nice one. As I said I like this kind of thing. A B&W conversion and some straightening of the pillars using perspective control could make a great deal of difference to this photo.