Homepage › Forums › Photo Critique › Street and Documentary › At the Flea market This topic is empty. At the Flea market ZargonMember October 3, 2012 at 6:20 pm davedunneParticipant October 4, 2012 at 2:51 pm A few quick comments:- For me this photo does not work well because I don’t know what the subject is supposed to be. Is it the umbrella or the woman or something else? The woman’s face is partially blocked by the pole and her head is conjoined with another woman behind her which I find distracting. I think this may have been better if you had clicked the shutter button a few seconds before or a few seconds after. ZargonMember October 5, 2012 at 8:35 pm Thanks Dave , some good points and all comments taken on board as this is how we learn ..clive. Viewing 3 posts - 1 through 3 (of 3 total) You must be logged in to reply to this topic.